Bring it on, Monday, hit me with your best shot! I am ready for you:
Y’all like my Monday face?
I had hoped to astonish you today with a brilliant poem, a glittering monument to my stunning skill and my felicitous facility with words, but this is all I came up with. I know you’ll love it anyway because y’all’re so awesome like that.
Did anyone catch the wordplay of this post’s title? First one to call it in the comments wins the prize, and if you can explicate exactly how and why it’s wordplay (i.e., read my mind), you win double goodies!
Mondayne
Monday, please be kind to me.
Fly quickly as this year.
I can’t believe tomorrow’s May,
and summer’s drawing near.
NaPoWriMo far too soon
has reached its hasty end,
left me feeling rather blue
of poems I’ve written only two.
One of which is this poor rhyme,
mundane as it can be.
I beg the Muse in coming months:
rain down artful creativity.
Well I liked it. It made me chuckle. Happy Monday
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Happy Monday to you, too, Kristian, though I suppose it’s just about over for you. Happy Tuesday, then!
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As an ode, it works very well, and yes, Mondays can be mundane.
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Congratulations, isaiah46ministries wins the prize! May you bask in the momentary glow of your brilliance all day! You have my respect and admiration.
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Hope your Monday passes by in a blink! Creative poem! An enjoyable read! 🙂
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Thank you, Patty. I hope you can see your influence in this one!
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Yes…the same beat!!!! I love it!!!!! 💙
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You’re a very witty writer. I liked what you did here.
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Why thank you, Buns!
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Anytime. Your work is pretty excellent.
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Bah humbug! I wanted to be the first to commute your sentence (a little work related humor for you instead!)
I shall go and sulk in the kitchen now!
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Cheer up, Britchy. I bestow upon thee today’s Denny Prize for Sustained Amusing Creativableness! A secondary requirement for receipt of said award is a promise of no sulking on recipient’s part!
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Pffft! I’ve been outmaneuvered!
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Loved the poem 💕☺️ short, sweet, appealing.
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Thank you, Mercy!
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Awesome poem, that’s how I feel at the moment. Clever ode to a mundane Monday!! It’s actually raining here, so…double gloom today.
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I hope your stormclouds swiftly pass, Em!
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haha loved the play on words, creative and very funny. The spruced up you I see.
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Yes, my 7-year old son & I went for haircuts Saturday. He has curly hair like me, and it had grown quite long. He was finally brave enough to let the barber use electric clippers and trimmers because he was “ready not to have fluffy hair for a while”. He was so pleased with the results that the rest of the weekend, every stranger we encountered out in public who would suffer his enthusiasm was regaled with his haircut story!
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Awe, that’s so sweet! What a delight they are at that age. Their world is fresher, smaller, filled with such delight. They find happiness in such unexpected places, and so willingly share. I remember those days as though it were yesterday. (cough cough) plus 30 years or so as my youngest grandchild is 8, 10, 15(16 soon) 16 (17 this month) ah, the memories Thank you for sharing. I love this! It warms my heart indeed :):)
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Thank you, by the way, Phyllis! I left that off the previous comment, sorry!
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No worries. I enjoy your visits. And visiting you. Your delightful.
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Does this mean you are chained to the Earth?
The cure might be a space vacation that has been in the news of late, if you could afford it.
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No, but that’s just as good an explanation, Steven. No, it’s just a silly pun on ‘ode’, a poetic form. So a poet might write a poem titled, for example, “Ode to Sadness”, which would be a celebration of sadness of sorts. Rather than writing an ode TO mundanity, I’m saying this poem was inspired by (owed to) mundanity. If I could afford a space vacation, I can think of much more practical things to spend the money on!
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I did not catch your original attempt. Mine was an attempt at mundane humor.
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Oops, that should have been intent.
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No worries, Steven! Only literature geeks like me would get such a cheesy trick. Philosophy geeks like you have far more important things to ponder! 😉
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If pondering your navel could be considered important.
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Ahh, ha ha ha ha ha ha haaaah! Wait, I ponder mine all the time…
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😀
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Cool as always haha 🙂 btw, about NaPoWriMo, you are the hero, I’ve written only…0 poems 🙂
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Tuesday also deserve a poem 🙂 especially when it is a 1st May 😂😉😬
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I agree but don’t know if I’m up to the task. I had a horrible night and a frustrating commute so am quite frazzled this morning!
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Then let’s move 1 of May to…tomorrow 😂👋 have a break & good day! ☀️
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Thank you, Ray, may you have a great day too!
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I really like the photo – good face! I’ve been doing Sudoku to sharpen the brain and so I un-punned your title 2, 3 hours. Maybe 4. Actually I slept on it and woke up with the true title flashing before me. Well that’s what our poetry teacher says to do if you’re stuck. The “prompt” this week: “What I took to be…” and today, Tuesday, by 12:30 pm I must have it ready! Wait … I think I’ve got an idea! Off to write.
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Thanks, Ellen. Did you get my response to your email last week? I couldn’t tell if my reply went through.
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If we’re talking about the poem about the combo dogs, I don’t see it. But I thank you for the thought, and I will assume (why not?) that you liked it more than you didn’t like it.
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Phooey. I just needed to read your reply more carefully … Yes, I did get your response. I’m so glad you reacted as you did …but not surprised. You clearly have a generous nature and a lot of, for lack of a nicer word, intelligence! It’s a good combo when it comes to hearing critiques of one’s work.
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I’d be happy to supply you with a defense of my poem as is and my reasons for not making any changes based on your generous advice. If you’re interested.
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Denny,
If poetry for you is a way of giving a little pleasure to self and others, i.e. the “craft” itself is not your primary focus, then suggestions are really not important. I think that’s true for 90% of the poems I see on people’s blogs. Unfortunately, I take the craft seriously now – I didn’t always at all – and it’s hard for me to turn that off. But I don’t plan to critique anyone else’s poems going forward because it just doesn’t feel good to me. So no defense is needed…you are the editor-in-chief and may do with words whatever gives you pleasure to do! And more power to you!
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Thank you, Ellen. I’m always open to criticism, though. I often state in a particular post that I’m in need of suggestions, but even when I don’t, I don’t mind at all.
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Yes, I remember that one. A clever play of words made me smile, like the first time 🙂
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